SHS2 English Language · Semester 2 Week 9: Production and Distribution of Text

Lesson notes

Learning Objectives

Indicator: 2.4.1.LI.1 - Critically analyse and compose concluding paragraphs on a given topic.

By the end of the lesson, learners can:

Identify the key features of an effective concluding paragraph by examining sample essays and passages.
Critically analyse concluding paragraphs to evaluate whether they restate the central idea, summarise supporting points, and provide a sense of closure.
Compose a concluding paragraph that restates the thesis through paraphrasing, summarises the main supporting ideas, and ends with a strong closing statement.
Peer-evaluate concluding paragraphs using a simple checklist based on the features studied.
Apply appropriate cohesive devices, particularly those showing result and conclusion, to link the concluding paragraph to the rest of the composition.

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Curriculum details

Strand: Writing (Strand 4)
Sub-strand: Production and Distribution of Text (4.1)
Content standard: 2.4.1.CS.2 - Create different paragraphs within a composition on a given topic. 2.4.1.LO.1 Employ cohesive devices, including connectors that demonstrate contrasts, results and other relationships, with the purpose of enhancing the coherence between paragraphs. 2.4.1.LO.2 Engage in critical analysis and construct concluding paragraphs pertaining to a provided topic.
Indicator: 2.4.1.LI.1 - Critically analyse and compose concluding paragraphs on a given topic.
Suggested placement: Semester 2, Week 9 (Week 29 of the year)
Our suggestion, laid out in curriculum order across three terms of twelve weeks. NaCCA does not fix the week, so follow your school's scheme of learning.
Source document note: The official curriculum document has a fault in this entry, so the curriculum text above is transcribed exactly as printed:

indicator text - p.143: the code 2.4.1.LI.1 names 2 different indicators in this year. This document restarts learning-indicator numbering at LI.1 under every content standard, so a code identifies an indicator only together with its content standard - here 2.4.1.CS.2
Curriculum reference: NaCCA curriculum document, p. 143

Exemplars (from the NaCCA curriculum)

Group Work/Collaborative Learning:
- In mixed ability groups, learners examine sample essays (sample essays and passages from books, journals and the internet) to identify their features.
- Learners, in their groups, plan and develop non-linear narrative essays focusing on the elements unity, coherence and paragraph completeness with appropriate transitional expressions.
- In the same or different mixed ability groups, learners compose essays in which events are not presented sequentially but rather mixed so that events are linked through flashbacks and other literary techniques such as suspense and foreshadowing to develop the plot of the narrative.
- In writing the story, learners may use first person, second person and third person (third-person omniscient or limited perspective), to represent the voice of the person telling the story (narrator). Revise and edit the writing for sense or meaning, and effect (emotional reaction). Proofread to self-correct or peer-edit. Publish or present in various media including ICT and on the various notice boards on the school's premises. Learners refer to books and the internet for examples of cohesive devices such as Time clauses, Conditional clauses, Purpose clauses, Reason clauses, Result clauses, Clauses of Concessive, etc. This search on the Internet will enhance their technology skills.
- Learners work collaboratively and employ appealing strategies to compose their concluding paragraphs. E.g. restating, by paraphrasing, the central idea of the entire essay and supporting ideas.
- Learners peer evaluate what they have written.
- Working in groups, learners acquire the value of contributing to a common goal.
- The following skills are also acquired: communication and collaboration, critical thinking and problem solving, innovation and creativity and leadership and collaboration.
Teaching and Learning Resources:
- Sample essays and passages from books
- Journals and the Internet.
Assessment (2.4.1.AS.1). The document marks these depth-of-knowledge levels for this indicator: Level 2 Skills of conceptual understanding; Level 4 Extended critical thinking and reasoning.
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